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 A Teabag on Stage  [E]
An inanimate object (the teabag) tells about itself-- for Slam
by Joy-the Harpy Witch
Review of A Teabag on Stage  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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What an unusual subject for a poem!
And - within that uniqueness, what a lovely take on the topic! I must admit when I read the title, I thought this would be 'comedy'. Then I saw 'comedy' wasn't one of the genres. You've related a simple episode well within the poetic form, and brought in some emotions, too. Great stuff! *Thumbsupl* I like the play on words with 'no thing' and 'nothing'.

Thanks, also, for mentioning and explaining the poetic form at the beginning. I don't know much about forms, and reading the explanation first helped me enjoy the poem even more.

Suggestion: Some WritingML, like font, size, center and maybe even color.

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