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Yesterday  [E]
In memory of a great principal, friend and all around lovely lady.
by Amay
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Congratulations on your WdC Anniversary.

Greetings from "The WDC Angel Army" 


Hallo
I saw your portfolio featured on "Anniversary Reviews"  and came over. As soon as I saw the brief description, I knew I had to read the poem - my mother was principal and passed away 14 years ago, and I'm sure many of her students feel this way.

The layout works for the poem and the words chosen are a lovely tribute. I wish the poem could have been longer! I wanted to read more about this lady - maybe particular examples of kids she has inspired, or particular areas of work. I guess I just wanted more! I'd also suggest you pick two more 'genres' to give this poem more exposure.

Thanks for acknowledging this lady, she sounds lovely.

Write on

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