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 The Winning Goal  [E]
Jimmy lives for soccer!
by Purple Eyez Aglow
Review of The Winning Goal  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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This is a good story written and told with the given prompt "The Winning Goal". The title fits this story. Though there is no dialogue but it floated beautifully. I like the ending.
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