This one showed up on Random Reads.

Ha ha ha ha -- it's a great poem, and when I reached the end and saw the prompt it was written for, I appreciated it all the more!

You've expressed the dilemma perfectly -- ALL your readers are surely going to relate to this. The layout, rhyme scheme and verse structure work well. My suggestion would be to pick a couple more genres so that this one shows up on more searches on site.

Thanks for the chuckle!
Write On!

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