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 DANCING IN THE RAIN  [E]
an acrostic of appreciation.
by Lou-Here By His Grace
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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This one showed up on Random Reads.
It's a lovely poem conjuring up vivid images and leaving the reader feeling happy! The verse structure and words chosen work well to create the mood of the poem.

I like the brief description, too, you reveal a philosophy with those few words -- appreciate the good in whatever happens.

My only suggestion would be to bold the starting letters, maybe using different colours for the different words in the acrostic, or line-spaces where the word changes (I don't think it matters if it's not even). Maybe some WritingML like center, font, size and colour.

Dance On!


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