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 | DANCING IN THE RAIN  [E] an acrostic of appreciation.  |
| (4.5)| Greetings from "The WDC Angel Army"   Hallo! This one showed up on Random Reads. It's a lovely poem conjuring up vivid images and leaving the reader feeling happy! The verse structure and words chosen work well to create the mood of the poem. I like the brief description, too, you reveal a philosophy with those few words -- appreciate the good in whatever happens. My only suggestion would be to bold the starting letters, maybe using different colours for the different words in the acrostic, or line-spaces where the word changes (I don't think it matters if it's not even). Maybe some WritingML like center, font, size and colour. Dance On!  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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