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 On the Days That I Cannot ...  [13+]
What being in a poly relationship can sometimes feel like.
by Rebecca Grace
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hallo!
This one showed up on Random Reads, and I'm glad it did.

While you are speaking of a particular kind of jealousy in a specific relationship, your feelings are universal. They apply for any relationship -- in a family, in a romance, in a friendship, even in professional life -- where there is a seeming 'triangle' involved.

And the way to cope in all these is the way you have mentioned. Each person must realize the uniqueness of individuals and what they have to offer, and how important it is to appreciate each one's contribution. Finally, a true bond, or true love, exists where the ego has been suppressed and the welfare of the other is most important. That is what you bring out. Also, that one has to have the self-esteem to overcome any insecurity that might exist.

For the presentation of the piece, I'd say -- check for punctuation and spacing.
Also, in terms of formatting, you may want to look at line-spacing, font, and size for easier readability.

Thank you for sharing this inspirational piece!

Write On!


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