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 | Close Encounter of a Strange Kind  [E] I learn that my communication is reaching new levels.  |
| (5.0)| Hallo! Thank you so much for sharing this delightful story. I love the way it progressed. Since it was an 'exchange', a roach tale for a roach tale, I was anticipating that -- but the rest was all a pleasant surprise. First, the admonishing about having no consideration for others. Then the whole conversation that followed, including the 'request', which held me in total suspense. You had me chuckling, and I am glad the two of you managed to work things out. My only little nit-pick (roach-pick) would be the repetition of the word 'obvious' in quick succession somewhere near the end. Maybe change one of those? And as an aside - I know a couple who are animal-whisperers, and they include cockroaches in this. They once told me that cockroaches communicate with 'vibes', as a group. They don't have individual conversations. I'm not implying you change anything about this tale, I'm just mentioning this since your story reminded me of that conversation with them! Write On!  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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