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 Jackie Runs Away  [E]
The story of a father, whose daughter grows up to fast in the modern world.
by GR Closey
Review of Jackie Runs Away  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

*BurstP* FIRST IMPRESSION: This is a good story. I enjoy every characters and their point of view.

*BurstP* DIALOGUES: The dialogue floated beautifully. I like the presentation.

*BurstP* CHARACTERS: All the characters are well developed. I especially liked the character “Jackie”. You crafted him so beautifully.

*BurstP* SUGGESTION: I didn't see any mistake.

*BurstP* FINAL THOUGHT: You are a good storyteller. I appreciate the way you are telling this story.


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