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 | THE VOICE WITHIN: Editor's choice  [E] Don't despair silence. Background noise removed, inner voice becomes audible.  |
| (5.0)| I am so happy that this one showed up on Random Reads! I immediately connected it to the 'noise' one finds (at least, pre-pandemic) in public places. There's always loud music, or someone shouting, or traffic or machines. When I read your poem, I further connected it to the 'noise' of others' voices, which does sometimes interfere with hearing the true inner voice. Taking this a step further, the outer voices could also be those telling one how to live life (Keeping up with the Joneses, or societal pressures about the 'right' way to live). Those voices need to be muted sometimes, too. This is a lovely poem in all ways - the technical aspects and the thoughts and emotions put forth. I have no suggestions, except maybe some WritingML like font, size, center and colour. Thank you so much. Write On!  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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