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This is good tribute persona poem. I feel that it wrote from life experience, senses and emotions, and it looks great.

*Bulletg* TITLE: The title fits your poem.

*Bulletg* IMAGERY:I like the emotion portrayed in the lines.

*Thumbsup* RHYMING & REPETITION:Your rhyming is pleasing to the ear. The tone is filled with sadness. I like the lines “You start to neglect me.
But, I always bless you being a mother.”

*Bulletg* OVERALL IMPRESSION :I enjoyed your poem.

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