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Disney Dilemma  [13+]
Where's a girl going to find the right shells? (Terza Rima Sonnet)
by Ben Langhinrichs
Review of Disney Dilemma  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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This one showed up on Random Reads. (And I almost decided to use a different image, that *Up* one being too 'innocent'!)

Well -- ha ha ha ha ha! A more relaxed dress code, yeah.

The poem is funny (I wonder what hardcore feminists would say, though. I guess they wouldn't be amused) and the solution is perfect. I can't comment on the technical aspects of the poem, but the contents gave me a chuckle.

When I saw the title at first I thought it would be about a kid wanting to go to Disneyland or watch a Disney movie or something. My Dad had once babysat a kid who got lost at Disneyland and I wondered if this was going to be something like that. Was I wrong?! *Shock*

Thank you for explaining the poetic form.
I'm not too good with forms of poetry and always appreciate it when there is a note given.

Just a heads-up - the 'image' at the top of your item has gone invalid, though the cover image is still visible.

I have no suggestions for this poem.

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