Greetings from
"The WDC Angel Army" !

Hallo! This one showed up on Random Reads.
I enjoyed this story! The dialogue between the monsters and their attempts to make themselves 'scary' are hilarious.

Some points:

Why don't they invent a wig-washing machine, so you can just pop all those wigs in with some shampoo and press a button?

sharps pains -- I think you mean 'sharp'.

scary." The -- I think you mean scary," the
similarly month." The ugliest -- month," the ugliest
first play," The better -- first play," the better

Standardise whether you have a capital 'D' for 'Dude' or not.

You use the word 'sucked' a lot. Maybe find a synonym for something that's not to your liking?

Thanks for the chuckle!

Write On!
Sonali

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .