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 Never out of season (cinquain)  [E]
An American cinquain (2/4/6/8/2)
by ผีKåreEngaในMontana
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hallo!
This one showed up on Random Reads.
I'm unable to comment on the technical aspects since I don't know much about a cinquain, so I'll respond to the content of the poem.

Well, that was unexpected.
When I started to read, I thought it would be about the beauty of nature in the winter ... and it turned out to be totally different. It shook me up and I had to read it again. That last word is so stark against the backdrop of the rest of the poem! Great job in a few short lines!

You haven't picked any 'genres' - is that on purpose? I usually tell people to pick genres to increase exposure for the work, but maybe you'd like to leave this as a surprise?

Thanks for sharing this.
It's small, but it packs a real punch.

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