Hi LucyWrites,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of excitement. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a woman who is in love with a man she is not sure is right for her. The reader is wondering if the woman and man in the poem will be a couple despite their differences. They will read to the last word to find out. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.