I found this article while doing a search for new members on Writing.com. I am reviewing your article as part of a challenge for the Wonderland contest.

Let me first explain that I am not a technical writer. I have no interest in the topic you write about. My interest in this article is strictly in the art of your writing.

To be taken seriously, your writing for anyone should be impeccable. Spelling, grammar, all should be proofread before you send it out to the public. You can use a program such as 'grammarly' if you are not comfortable with any part of proofreading.

So, my recommendations:
Take a bowl of soapy water and blow a bit of pure oxygen through it, the resulting bubbles can be pulled across the surface by a strong magnet. If you don't have pure oxygen handy, use hair spray, this time the bubbles will have no oxygen and will be pushed away from the magnet, by the oxygen in the air moving towards the magnet. I find this to be two run-on sentences. So, maybe this could be:
Take a bowl of soapy water. Blow a bit of pure oxygen through it. The resulting bubbles can be pulled across the surface by a strong magnet. If you don't have pure oxygen handy, use hair spray. This time the bubbles will have no oxygen, and will be pushed away from the magnet by the oxygen in the air moving toward the magnet.

wikipedia The correct term is Wikipedia - capital W.
trucksYou should use truck's - showing possession.
throneI think you meant to use thrown.
into the engine. Where it willPerhaps, you should say: ...into the engine, where it will...

Like I stated, I am not criticizing the information you posted, I am reviewing the spelling and grammar. I wish you all the best in your writing.

May your time here at Writing.com be fruitful. Good luck and Write.on.
















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