Well hello. I noticed you are a new member here on Writing.com. I am reviewing this short fiction on behalf of a challenge for the Wonderland contest.

I like short fiction. I participate often in the Daily Flash Fiction contest. Not to brag, but I've won my fair share.

This is fun. I don't know if there were prompts, but it has drama. A story all wapped up in 26 words. You gave us the problem, then we wait for the end. We know it's coming, but hope somehow it won't.

I don't think I would change anything. You could enlarge it a bit. But if this is length you were going for, it has enough merit to stand as is.

Write on!
Queen Norma Jean

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .