Let's Get Physical [XGC] After an escape from a bear encounter, Arlynn decides taking things slow is over rated. |
Introduction~ Cadie here for your final review of Building Emotion and Sensuality. NOTE: This review is only the opinion of one author. This review is meant to help and NOT hurt. Personal Impressions~ I enjoyed watching your characters grow in their relationship with each other. This story has been a joy to read. It was a bit rough in the beginning, yet you've improved as time has gone on. Plot~ Arlynn encountered a bear in the woods that drove her to Ryan's arms. He comforts her and they have a quicky moment on the porch. Later that evening they have another sexual encounter. I don't totally understand why Ryan wants to take it slow with Arlynn, it sounds as if these two have NOT slept together and yet they have. I like that you slowed the scene considerably though. Technical Aspects~ Your descriptions give the reader enough information to get into the scene but not general enough to not know what is going on. Conclusions~ You've done well over the last six weeks in this class. You've worked hard in this class with these characters. Good Job. Thank you for sharing and Keep Writing! My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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