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| (4.5)| It is my pleasure to read your story and give you a raid review on this touching story named, "Ella." Welcome to WDC!  Reader's Reaction: WOW! I love Ella, and wish I could have met her. She sounds like such a sweetheart, and I'm sure all who were close to her felt her loving nature. Yes, one young man was very lucky to receive this heart that Ella passed up, knowing the chances were slim it would save her. Why not give the heart to someone who has a better chance at a new life. Characters/Dialog: This character, Ella, had a loving nature, making all those around her feel special. So sad she died, and didn't get to be with her mother in Africa as planned. I guess it wasn't to be.The dialog felt true and showed Ella as a compassionate person. Great job!  Emotion/Mood/Atmosphere: The emotion is loving, helping people feel welcome in a new job. The mood is reflecting on an issue, and a sincere state of mind.  Plot & Pace: The plot is a story about a real-life guardian angel.The pace shows a person filled with love for her fellow man. We need more people like Ella in this world.  Structure - setting & Imagery: The narrative structure takes the plot - referring to dramatic action of a person this author admires. The descriptions builds a character who determined how to love her fellowman. Favorite Lines: Candidate hearts for Ella became available only rarely, due to her African heritage. But eventually her name reached the top of the list and then, one fateful day, the call came. But it turned out that there was a problem. The heart was from an infant, and the doctors told Ella that it was questionable whether the tiny heart would be able to keep her alive.  Overall Impression/Conclusion: Ella made a lot of choices in her life, but this one choice she made showed who she really was. She weighed the odds and chose, showing her love for human life. What a great story, I'm so glad I picked this one to review. WriteOn!  Thank you for sharing your work with us! Jeannie☃️    My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 02/09/2020 @ 5:53pm EST