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 The Traditional Repairman Open in new Window. [E]
A short allegorical story satirizing the concept of traditions. Inspired by Catch-22.
by Steven Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Greetings, Steven!
This is pretty good for one of your 1st pieces on here, and I like the way you told it. Can't say I've read something like this before, as far as the subject. The idea that this poor repairman (reminds me of that old Maytag TV commercial with the lonely repairman! *Laugh*) having to go through life the 'traditional' way is pretty original, and you did a good job of telling it. But having to lose his wife over it? Oh well, at least he's still staying positive! *Laugh*
Flawless spelling and grammar, and although there was a bit more telling than showing, it's still turned out pretty good!
Kee ponw ritin gon, my friend, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write (and now you're getting more serious about it? *Thumbsupl*), then you're going to love it here!
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