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Ahoy, Hullabaloo!
This is pretty neat!
You probably already know that Arakun the twisted raccoon loves twisted endings, and you did a great job with this one!
The descriptions you used for these two potential thieves as they broke into the house was good, and that reference to the growl coming from Paul's stomach was a nice touch.
The spelling and grammar was flawless, and as I said, that ending was perfect!
Kee ponw ritin gon, Hullabaloo! Thanks for sharing this, and have a hauntingly happy Halloween!
(Ugly gargoyle? There's no such thing! *Laugh*)

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