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         *Penguin* Greetings, concrete_angel! I am reviewing this because I am part of "I Write in 2019" Open in new Window., *Smile*

         First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. *Smile* Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

Title
         Loved it!

My First Impression
         I could read your poetry all day! This is absolutely amazing. Earth reclaims herself back after man's selfish annihilation... I could not have written anything even close to this piece, how you describe the beauty from decay. Wow. Great job!

Punctuation/Grammar/Typos
         *Asteriskb* None

Other Suggestions
         *Asteriskv* None

Thoughts/Emotions
         *Asterisko* Your words, your flow, your imagery... wow. You should seriously send this piece in somewhere. I'm still in awe...

         *Starb* My favorite line:
                             lazy curl of green through mudcracked streets,

*Penguin* Nicely written! I hope my suggestions were helpful. *Penguin*

*Fisho* Have a great day and *Fishb*
K e e p on W r i t i n g !
~Cubby ")
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