Hi AnonNaomi of WdC,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of amazement. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a very strange, astonishing dream you have had. I rarely remember my dreams. It usually only happens with I wake up in the middle of one. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.