Hello HuntersMoon,

Happy last day of your WDC Anniversary month! And happy New Year's Eve!

I enjoyed reading your comedic contribution to the "Once Upon A Contest" fairy tale story poem contest. I especially loved the rhyming of danced and underpants. You made me grin with that combo.

You definitely told The Emperor's New Clothes story with a modern twist. I would never have thought of going in this direction for that contest. You get an A for out of the box thinking, for sure.

Your poem is well done, flows nicely and followed the Clerihew form well. I had to look up the form and I thank you for including the link to make it super easy.

I didn't notice any mistakes of any kind in your poem.

Your poem is so well written that I have no suggestions for improvement.

Thank you for sharing your funny poem!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance this New Year and always!
PWheeler




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