Hi Dominique ! I'm stopping by your port to read and review your item, "The distance between love and lost" in celebration of your new account on WDC! Welcome, welcome! I've seen you around the site a lot, entering contests and such. Keep up the good work! I expect I'll see you around a lot more!

Upon opening this poem, I was immediately struck by your formatting! It's lovely! Reminds me of the Queen of Hearts Very good job there. Usually I have comments for newbies on their formatting and poem presentation, but yours is lovely! The shape of the stanzas is even spot on! Keep at it!

I loved several of your lines including: "since when am I ready to aim a conviction? / over an unjustified feeling, a prediction?" and "his eyes are just precious with that innocence / all he needs from family is love and consistence." Your emotion rings so clear in this poem. You have a way with words!

This comment is more about your port in general rather than about this poem. It's so cool that you are already jumping in head first to entering contests and posting your writing, but as you get more pieces in your portfolio, it will get harder and harder to find things. It would be a good idea for you to start creating folders for your item types right now so that your port stays clean and easy to navigate. You could have a folder for poems, one for short stories, and one for essays, for example.

Thank you for sharing your writing! And again, welcome to WDC!

Take care,
Emily

You responded to this review 09/04/2018 @ 5:30pm EDT

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