Hi-ho again
Jellyfish 
! You know why I'm here ...

What a
great interview! The interviewer melting at the end was a little cheesy, but they can be however you want them to be, right? Ha! It was such a reflective and personal piece, and really conveys your emotion about WDC. Very cool concept! The interviewer sounds so disapproving of WDC though!

LOL! Do they represent someone you know, perhaps?

I only spotted one little typo: "tidying out that draw of a million bottles of nail varnish you have" -- "draw" should be drawer

Also, some of your sentences are missing the period at the end (paragraphs 1, 7, 22, and 25)

Overall, your piece was a very fun read and I'm glad I stumbled across it! Your genres already fit so well with this piece, but I think it deserves the Comedy genre as well. Perhaps you could add this in the key words?

Thank you again for sharing your writing! See ya around! - Emily
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