The following are my own observations and opinions that are intended to improve your work. Take and leave what you will. Below, your words are in parenthesis mine are not.


This review is done to celebrate your WdC anniversary! Congratulations!


This was short but very funny! Nice way of using the three kinds of animals the man has. The last two lines are the funniest. I saw you used punctuation in this. I often miss when to properly use them. LOL. Anyway, this piece was classic. What was the name of the contest? Was 1,000 the word constraint? Happy WdC anniversary!