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 Growing Up On Facebook  [E]
How having a Facebook account forced me to become an adult.
by writingrose
Review by Angus
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Greetings, Writingrose!
This isn't bad, and I congratulate you on confessing to some of these 'offenses', if that's what they could be called.
Like you, I'm a 'Toys R Us' kid, and even though I'm 52 years old, I still don't feel like I've grown up! And I have 4 grandchildren!
But as for your affliction with Facebook, I personally can't understand your fascination with it, other than to 'spy' on your high school nemeses. They said that they internet would bring people closer, but I think it's done just the opposite! People don't talk to each other face to face anymore, they can simply punch a few buttons and think that's all good and well. If that's being close, then I'm on the wrong planet!
However, if Facebook has helped you to see things with a new set of eyes and change your life, then I'm happy for you. And since you wrote this more than 8 years ago, things should be drastically different for you now!
At least I hope so!
Sorry to be so picky, but I did spot a few tiny niggles:
'I use the term veuyer becua(s)e that is the way I feel on this site...'
'Could it possible be that I do not feel like an adult...' (possibly)
'Finally, I had what I needed to push myselrf into adulthood...' (myself)
Kee ponw ritin gon, Writingrose, wherever you are, and I hope your life is going great!

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