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Buenos dias, Ricky!
This is a neat little piece about a mischievous snowman throwing snowballs at innocent victims, and if it were any other time of the year, I'd be cheering him on. But since it is Christmas, I suppose they did the right thing by 'forcing' him to curtail his snowball pitching. But I don't think they should have thrown snowballs back at the poor fella! Two wrongs don't make a right, doncha know? Why didn't they simply ask him to stop?
Violence begets violence, so those townsfolk are just lucky they didn't have a full blown out war on their hands!
*Laugh* *Rolling* *Laugh*
Great job with the rhyming scheme, my friend! And I'm even going to 'favor' this piece as a Holiday Classic, right up there with "Frosty's Revenge?" Open in new Window.!
One tiny typo:
'He was throwing the(m) slow'
My only other suggestion would be to maybe give this snowman a name. Lucifer perhaps? *Devilish*
Kee ponw ritin gon, Ricky! 'Twas a pleasure to read, and...

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