Hello Sarah

This is an Angel Review   

Disclaimer:
These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

The title captured my attention. I have been in many small earthquakes, but never thought to write a poem about them.

This piece is direct and to the point. Though just a few lines you have painted a picture of destruction and fear. Great job with the imagery and emotions. I'm left wondering if there are any survivors.

The rhythm flows at a quick pace. And an interesting rhyming scheme. Good word selection. Each line flows nicely into the next line.


Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading Earthquake.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .