House Florent "Game of Thrones" 

A review for "The Iron Bank of Braavos" 

Hi, Kevin.

My name is Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: The Stuttering Hedgehog of WW Two.

First Impression: The title of this poem aroused my curiosity. The first stanza hooked me with Jim resting on a tree limb and looked up into the sky.

What needs your attention: I encountered no distractions or anything else that needs your attention.

What part I liked best: I like the author's use of internal rhyme because it emphasized the theme of the poem. The second stanza was my favorite because of the the internal rhyme in the second stanza on fashioned and rationed. I, also, like the margarine fly because it was during World War Two that margarine came into major use.

Overall impression: The first stanza establishes the plot, theme, and mood of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other while the rhythm moves the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense, while emphasizing the patriotic emotions.

I enjoyed reading this well-written and thought provoking children's poem because it is the type of poem that can be read to children as a bedtime story. Write on.

Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .