House Florent "Game of Thrones" 

A review for "The Iron Bank of Braavos" 

Hi, srwilson

My name is Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: Purebred

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Crumb getting lost and slipping into a stream.

What needs your attention: I discovered no technical problems or anything else that needs your attention.

What part I liked best: I like Crumb because he is an intriguing and sympathetic character with no sense of direction. Which is probably why he got lost in the first place. I also like the title because it suggests a theme without giving the plot away.

Overall impression: Crumb is hiking when he gets lost and falls into a stream. While walking back to the main road, where he can catch a bus, he comes to a house hidden in the woods, and concealed by ivy. Crumb knocks on the door, in order to get some assistance, and is admitted to the house by a servant.

The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction and conversation between the characters reveals their personalities and builds the suspense. I enjoyed reading this chilling story because the author showed the action rather then telling it. The climax made senses in the context of the story. Write on.

Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .