House Florent "Game of Thrones" 

A review for "The Iron Bank of Braavos" 

Hi, Jim, Happy Anniversary.

My name is Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: 1 For Want of a Bag of Grain

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Anton attempting to step into his fathers footsteps.

What needs your attention: I found no technical problems or anything else that needs your attention.

What part I liked best: I like the similes and metaphors written into this story because they are fresh and descriptive. I especially like this simile, as rigid as the king’s law. Another thing I like about this story was the title because it suggested a theme without giving away the plot.

Overall impression: Anton and his father are hunting for food and fire wood when the encounter soldiers from a neighboring kingdom.

The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense. The interaction and conversation among the characters reveals their personalities and builds the suspense. I enjoyed reading this exciting and well-written story because of the strong characters and the smooth flow of the plot from the beginning to the climax. I am giving this intriguing and thought provoking story a 5.0. Write on.

Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .