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Romantic Rejection Open in new Window. [13+]
Why does romantic rejection hurt? For a newsletter.
by THANKFUL SONALI Library Class! Author Icon
In affiliation with The Iron Bank of Braavos  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hallo THANKFUL SONALI Library Class! Author Icon!*Smile*
I will be reviewing your work "Romantic Rejection" Open in new Window. on behalf of "House Targaryen Points" Open in new Window. for "Game of Thrones" Open in new Window.

*Dragon2*Content:

A survey that revolves around romantic rejections and its effects on the person.

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Hmmm...well these are some rather interesting questions you've got here for your newsletter, and I'm sure it's bound to have the reader thinking over this carefully before answering them.

The first question deals with the question I'm sure so many people have asked themselves over the years "Why does romantic rejection hurt?" I know this isn't the right place to answer it, but I'm sure many will go 'well..duh...it hurts because you've given a part of yourself to someone else and that - in and of itself - is not an easy thing for some to do. When that trust is trampled upon, you feel as if you've been violated in the most personal way possible. That part of you is shattered and you sometimes never recover."

I could go on with this - and answering your other questions that deal with comparing romantic rejection to professional rejection (are they the same? - short answer...nope!) Some folks get over the professional rejection much quicker than a romantic one I think.

But I'll stop here now *Laugh*

*Dragon2*Suggestions:
Here are a few things I noticed while reading. Please remember that these are only my suggestions/opinions and it's ultimately up to you to choose what works best. *Smile*

Hmmm...nothing stood out to me per se, but then again, these are just questions that one has to answer in the survey. Good thing you made a lot of room for participants to just vent.

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Now I'm curious to see the newsletter this was featured in! I wonder what kind of answers you received. Thanks for sharing and keep on writing! *Bigsmile*



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