House Florent "Game of Thrones" 

A review for "The Iron Bank of Braavos" 

Hi, Lady of Life,

My name is Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: Queen Anne

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Anne, the speaker, turning sixteen.

What needs your attention: I encountered no technical problems or anything else that needs your attention.

What part I liked best: I like Anne because she is a strong and sympathetic woman. I also like the way this story shows how Anne changed through the the movement of the narrative. Anne became stronger and more independent as the story moved forward. Another think I like about this story was the lesson that only God can judge the choices a person makes in their life.

Overall impression: Against her mother's wishes, and despite the fact that she lost custody of her daughter, Anne chooses her own path to happiness. The speaker moves the narrative and plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense. I enjoyed reading this thought provoking and inspiring story. I am giving this story a 5.0 because of the lesson it teaches about leaving judgment up to God and finding ones own path to happiness. Thank you for sharing Queen Anne's inspiring story. Write on.

Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .