House Florent "Game of Thrones" 

A review for "The Iron Bank of Braavos" 

Hi, Bryce.

My name is Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: The Green Hour

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the rain pounding Sir Roderick Steen's umbrella.

What needs your attention: I found no technical problems or anything else that need your attention.

What part I liked best: There are several things about this story that I like. First, I like the metaphors and similes because they are fresh, descriptive, and fit the theme of the story. I especially like this simile, softly caressed every inch of his skin, like a whisper. Second, I like Parson Sinews because, despite the fact that he is a vampire, he is a gentleman and sympathetic. Third, I like Roderick Steen because he is sympathetic and intriguing.

Overall impression: Sir Roderick Steen has come to the home of Parson Sinews to get his assistance in a case that Detective Inspector Taggert is working on. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense. I enjoyed reading this exciting story because the action kept me focused on the plot and the characters. Write on.

Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .