House Florent "Game of Thrones" 

A review for "The Iron Bank of Braavos" 

Hi, Paul D

My name is Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: On the Cutting Edge of Science

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Dr. Fairly attempting to focus on driving while thinking about the argument he had with his wife.

What needs your attention: I found no technical problems or anything else that needs your attention.

What part I liked best: I like Dr. Fairly because he is an intriguing, and, somewhat, sympathetic character. I also like the subtle ways Dr. Fairly and Dr. Sanders show their affection for each other. Another thing I like was the way the author showed the tight security at Site Q because it suggested it was authentic.

Overall impression: Dr. Roger Fairly is on the cutting edge of nanotechnology when an accident leaves the president incapacitated. Against his better judgment, Dr. Fairly does what is requested to do. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense. I enjoyed reading this story. The Biblical scripture at the climax demonstrated the story's lesson. I am giving this exciting and well-written story a 5.2. Write on.

Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .