House Florent "Game of Thrones" 

A review for "The Iron Bank of Braavos" 

Hi, S Ferguson~ Prepping for Prep , Happy Anniversary.

My name is Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: In Venice

First Impression: The title and description of this story aroused my curiosity. The first paragraph hooked me with the horror movies silence.

What needs your attention: I found no technical problems or anything else, in the story itself, that needs your attention. The only suggestion I have is to give the story a specific genre such as horror, folklore, or mythology.

What part I liked best: The next to the last paragraph is my favorite because it emphasizes the Zombies' ability to smell living flesh. I also like the smooth flow of the plot from the beginning to the climax.

Overall impression: Miranda is in Venice attempting to flee the zombies that are prowling the city. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense. I enjoyed reading this exciting story because Miranda appeared to be a strong woman who knew where she wanted to go in Venice. The third person voice was a good choice for this story because kept the reader's attention without too much emotions. Write on.

Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .