House Florent "Game of Thrones" 

A review for "The Iron Bank of Braavos" 

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My name is Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: The Danger of Flip-Flops

First Impression: The quote by Jimmie Buffett at the beginning of this essay hooked me because I wear flip-flops.

What needs your attention: I found no technical problems or anything else that needs your attention. I suggest submitting this essay to a magazine or journal that specializes in personal essay of various types because this is an education piece that more people need to read.

What part I liked best: I like the way the author uses experience from her professional field to emphasize the reasons people should not sear flip-flops. These reasons gave me a lot to consider when I go to purchase a new pair of shoes.

Overall impression: The basic idea of this essay is the dangers of flip-flops. I knew some of the dangers before I read this item, but the author listed other dangers which I had not considered. I enjoyed reading this educational and thought provoking item. I am giving this intriguing essay a 5.0 because it is well-written and contains educational information that everyone wearing flip-flops should consider. Thank you for sharing this wonderful item. Write on.

Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .