House Florent "Game of Thrones" 

A review for "The Iron Bank of Braavos" 

Hi

My name is Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: Young Summer Love Word count 957

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with young love and the reason the letter was never delivered. The author, is the speaker in the letter, shows her love through the words of the letter rather then telling about that summer love.

What needs your attention: A missing word in this phrase, I really is, I suggest inserting want after really. I suggest using this letter as the basis of a fictional love story where two people, similar to the young couple in the letter, meet forty years later.

What part I liked best: I had difficulty deciding which part of this letter like best. I think that is because of the way the author shows a love that built up through the summer. The best part was the way love was expressed.

Overall impression: The author moves the letter's narrative forward at a good pace while emphasizing the love and suggesting regrets. Regret is not mention by name in this letter, but it is shown through the words and phrases. I enjoyed reading this intriguing and thought provoking letter because it emphasizes the fact that a person should not hesitate in expressing love.

Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .