House Florent "Game of Thrones" 

A review for "The Iron Bank of Braavos" 

Hi

My name is Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: My Cell Phone is Out to Get Me

First Impression: The title of this story aroused my curiosity because sometimes I think my smart phone is out to get me. The first paragraph of this monologue gives the reasons the speaker chose a cell phone over a land line phone. The descriptions are made part of action of the story, so the action kept my attention through out this piece.

What needs your attention: I found no technical problems or anything else that need attention.

What part I liked best: I like the description of how the cell phone is out to get the speaker because they made me laugh. I especially like the way the speaker got locked out of the house while talking to a college friend. I also like the reaction of the child when he found he was alone.

Overall impression: The author moves the monologue's narrative forward at a good pace while making me laugh or smile knowingly about why the cell phone is out to get the speaker. I enjoyed reading this funny and thought provoking satire. I am giving this wonderful story a 5.0 because it made me laugh throughout the monologue. Thank you for sharing this funny monologue. Write on.

Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .