House Florent "Game of Thrones" 

A review for "The Iron Bank of Braavos" 

Hi

My name is Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: Being Self-Aware through the Golden Rule

First Impression: The first paragraph of this essay hooked me with the golden rule and every action having a reaction. The author moves the narrative forward at a good pace while emphasizing the importance of practicing the Golden Rule. The author also reveals some of the issues a person encounters while practicing the Golden Rule.

What needs your attention: I did not find any technical problems or anything else that needs attention. My only suggestion would be to write a short story using the Golden Rule as part of the plot.

What part I liked best: I like the way the author uses examples from personal experience to show both the reason we should practice the Golden Rule and what issues we might encounter if we practice this rule with selfish expectations. The last sentence is this essay is my favorite because it reminds the reader that the Golden Rules should be practiced unselfishly and without expecting anything in return.

Overall impression: I enjoyed reading this well-planned and thought provoking essay because it reminded me of how the Golden Rule should be practiced. Write on.

Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .