House Florent "Game of Thrones" 

A review for "The Iron Bank of Braavos" 

Hi

My name is Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: The Guide

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the man and his son going through a forest. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense. The story is about a boy, doing what young boys are known to do, wandering away from his father and getting lost in the forest.

What needs your attention: I found no technical problems or anything else that needs attention. This is a well-written flash fiction story.

What part I liked best: I like the way the beast protected and helped the beast find his father. The author shows the beast to be a sympathetic creature through its actions with the boy. I also like the title of this story because it suggests a theme without giving away the plot.

Overall impression: The characters in this flash fiction story are well rounded considering the story is so short. The boy and the beast, that guides the boy back to his father, are revealed in the best light. I enjoyed reading this exciting action/adventure story. I am giving this story a 5.0 because it kept my attention all the way through and had well described characters. Write on.

Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .