House Florent "Game of Thrones" 

A review for "The Iron Bank of Braavos" 

Hi

My name is Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: If Words Could Kill

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the description of the writer's den. Captain Kurosawa is investigating the mysterious death of a self-employed writer. At the crime scene he encounters a representative from the CDC. The descriptions are art of the action, while kept me focused on the plot and the characters reactions to the situation.

What needs your attention: I found no technical problems or anything else that need attention. My only suggestion would be to use Captain Kurosawa because he is an interesting and likeable character.

What part I liked best: I like this metaphor, Ideas burn within me, tearing at the membrane of my brain to get out. It is fresh, well-written, and visually descriptive. I also like the simile in this story because they help build the suspense and the terror.

Overall impression: The title is a good choice because it suggests a theme without giving away the plot. The characters are well developed and sympathetic. The two endings are chilling and fit the story while solving the mystery of the author's death.

Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .