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The Season Is Ripe  [E]
celebrating springtime in a Haiku Sonnet
by Gravedigger Dave
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with Earth Day Challengers  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello!Dave

I just read your poem.I am reviewing you on behalf of the “The Earth day Challenge”. I am not a writing expert and this review is my opinion only.

I like your Haiku Sonnet poem.
The way you wrote this poem keeps me reading it from the beginning to the end. I like how every third line ended with the same phrase “The season is ripe.”

This poem is unique and flows beautifully with your crafted words. Your rhyming scheme makes this poem more interesting. I like the last stanza

"In Mother Nature's new clothes,
the earth celebrates rebirth."

You used the Punctuation marks which help the readers to read it smoothly. I learned how to write Haiku Sonnet.

This is a wonderful poem especially I like the ending.

Happy Writing!

Mina  

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