Hello Mari McKee , I am reviewing this item as part of the "30-Day Blogging Challenge ON HIATUS"  February 50/50 challenge.

My First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the humorous definition of drive-through surgery. The author moves the narrative and laughter forward at a good pace. The laughter builds as the story progresses.

My Favorite Part: I like the author's comparison of outpatient surgery to a McDonald's drive-through to outpatient surgery. I also like the active descriptions because the author showed through the action what was happening instead of just telling about it.

My Final Thoughts and/or Suggestions: I found no technical problems. I enjoyed reading this funny story. I am giving this story a 5.0 because I laughed throughout the story.








My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .