Hello, I am reviewing for "a very Wodehouse challenge" . You followed your Acrostic very well and told the story in poetry form well also. As I read this I thought about the archer and the shot they were taking. In picturing this, I thought it would be a straight short shot. Then realized in the poem it was probably a longer shot that had to have some arch to it in order to make it to the target. This is a good piece. Found the ARCHERY at the end of every line and understand why the 'A' is there. Thank you for sharing, keep writing.
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