Hello, SB Musing What I liked It introduces spam in the most repulsive possible way, and it truly made me feel ill reading that bit. Spamtastic! You probably covered every single bit of the prompt paragraph rather than selecting a small part of it. Well done! What might need work It's terrible enough. No need to add more spam to make it any worse! I look forward to reading more of your spam filled, naughty poems. Following the contest guidelines, I'll give it a 1 rating! Thank you for sharing! Best wishes, Bob My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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