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 Goosed Open in new Window. [E]
Unusual road kill
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Review by dblameck (David) Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Review of Goosed


First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions. This review was done for the Game of Crowns contest.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Road Kill is something that happens on the highways. This story deals with a person driving home and seeing a dead goose on the side of the road. Hitting something as big as a goose could do some damage to a vehicle. I assume it was walking even if the writer was wondering about how low it might be flying.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

The author goes on to wonder of what the driver was doing that they didn't notice and goose and was able to avoid the goose. Finally the author things they would at least noticed once they hit the bird because it would be greater than just hitting a pothole.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

It was an interesting thought about the goose and i enjoyed reading it. Please keep writing.

dblameck

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