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A Murder of Crows Open in new Window. [13+]
A fight breaks out at a funeral. Contest with prompt under 1000 words.
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Review by dblameck (David) Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Review of A Murder of Crows

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions. This review was done for the Game of Crowns contest.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Yes a group of crows is known as a murder. in this story we find the crows attending a sort of funeral get-together for this dead crow. The funeral service is conducted by a magpie. The entire story seems a bit unusual.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

The crows come together to say farewell to this crow. Their service is temporarily interrupted by three drunk humans or as the describe them as flightless, The discussion moves to the point if the dead crow was male or female. they move the body and discover a piece of shiny ribbon. A fight ensues and the body is consumed by the live crows.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

an interesting story. Please keep writing.

dblameck


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