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Review of Laundry Nightmare

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions. This review was done for the Game of Crowns contest.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A short humorous poem about a man trying to help his wife out by doing the laundry. Since their washer is broken down he must transport the material to be washed. In order to get it there it must be transported in a vehicle that is not that clean. It is a problem with just so many facets that can go wrong.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

In ten rhyming couplets the author tells the story of a laundry mis-adventure when a man takes it on himself to help out by taking the laundry to the local laundromat. A dirty truck means the man decides to put the wet clothes in a cardboard box. This ends us being a wet box and eventually laundry that is even dirtier than before.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

You brought a smile to my face. Keep writing and sharing.

dblameck


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